Monday, November 9, 2020

The Chopping Block

 




(The Time Machine by Robert Margetts)


www.robertmargetts.com


THE CHOPPING BLOCK

 

A blacksmith’s anvil,
An editor’s block,
The blade and the basket
Await the cock.

Steel meets the neck,
The hinge gives way—
Blood arcs bright
In a crimson spray.

To sever the spine,
To spill what must flow,
To purge the sickness
From stone below.

The calloused palm
Of a wanton hand
Stroked frail manhood,
A fragile command.

Slowly inching
Toward that crest,
Pulse upon pulse
In a tightening chest.

Flesh against flesh,
Friction fed,
A swelling crown
Of aching red.

Beneath the rise
Of the mushroomed hill,
Heat climbed higher,
Relentless still.

One final stroke—
A failing spurt.
A breath half-caught,
A fleeting hurt.

Soft talons closed
On withering might,
Clutching the last
Of fading fight.

And so it ended—
Not with a cry,
But in the hush
Where endings lie.





what does this poem mean?

To me, the guy is getting a helping hand on his little friend. LOL..


The poem opens with imagery of:

  • an anvil

  • a chopping block

  • a blade

  • a basket

This evokes a ritual execution — something final, irreversible, and solemn. But as the poem unfolds, it becomes clear that this “execution” is symbolic.

The second thread describes the fading of physical vitality — the weakening of the body, the collapse of strength, the end of a once‑powerful force. The two narratives mirror each other:

  • the falling blade

  • the failing body

  • the severing of energy

  • the quiet end

The poem uses the metaphor of execution to describe the end of potency, agency, or life force.























































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